Tuesday, 23 May 2017
Wednesday, 10 May 2017
The bad unicorn and the three unicorns
Walt: to be able to write a using creative language
Walt: to be able to use an existing story and put our own spin on it
Start Writing here…once a upon a time There was a daddy unicorn a mother unicorn and a baby unicorn. There live in a coldly cloud. There had hay and oats it was really cold so they put it in the microwave and took it out and put in on a plate to cool now then they went for a walk. After that a bad baby unicorn walked in the door then he smelled some hay and oats and he went at the table and taste the papa unicorn hay and oat and he said that hay and oat is too hot. Then he tasted the mother unicorn hay and oat and said this hay and oat is too cold to eat then he taste the little unicorns hay and oat and the the bad unicorn said this is just right.The he ate it all up Then he saw some chairs and sat on the papa unicorn’s chairs and said this chair is to hard the he sat on the mother unicorn’s chair and he said this chair is to soft then he sat on little unicorn’s chair and said this chair is just right then the chair started to break then he went in the bedroom and said I I'm so tired to sleep for a few minutes then he slept on the papa unicorn’s bed and said this bed is hard to sleep said the bad unicorn then he slept in mother unicorn’s bed and said this bed is too soft too sleep in said the bad unicorn then he slept in the little unicorn’s bed and said this bed is just right then he went to sleep for a few minutes.Then the three unicorn’s came home and the papa unicorn said someone have eaten my hay and oat said papa unicorn someone has eaten my hay and oat said mother unicorn and someone has eaten my hay and oat said baby unicorn and it all gone then they went in the room and said someone has sat on my seat said papa unicorn someone has sat on my seat said mother unicorn and someone has sat on my seat said baby unicorn and it broken then they went in the bedroom someone has slept in my bed said papa unicorn someone has slept in my bed said mother unicorn and someone has slept in my bed said baby unicorn and here she is said baby dog then when the bad unicorn woke up he saw Three mad unicorn and he jump out of the window and ran away as fast as he could and he ran back home and told his mum that he would never go so far ever again said the bad unicorn and the three papa and mother and baby unicorn they live happily very after.The end
today we were talking about Goldilocks and the three bears
Walt: to be able to use an existing story and put our own spin on it
Start Writing here…once a upon a time There was a daddy unicorn a mother unicorn and a baby unicorn. There live in a coldly cloud. There had hay and oats it was really cold so they put it in the microwave and took it out and put in on a plate to cool now then they went for a walk. After that a bad baby unicorn walked in the door then he smelled some hay and oats and he went at the table and taste the papa unicorn hay and oat and he said that hay and oat is too hot. Then he tasted the mother unicorn hay and oat and said this hay and oat is too cold to eat then he taste the little unicorns hay and oat and the the bad unicorn said this is just right.The he ate it all up Then he saw some chairs and sat on the papa unicorn’s chairs and said this chair is to hard the he sat on the mother unicorn’s chair and he said this chair is to soft then he sat on little unicorn’s chair and said this chair is just right then the chair started to break then he went in the bedroom and said I I'm so tired to sleep for a few minutes then he slept on the papa unicorn’s bed and said this bed is hard to sleep said the bad unicorn then he slept in mother unicorn’s bed and said this bed is too soft too sleep in said the bad unicorn then he slept in the little unicorn’s bed and said this bed is just right then he went to sleep for a few minutes.Then the three unicorn’s came home and the papa unicorn said someone have eaten my hay and oat said papa unicorn someone has eaten my hay and oat said mother unicorn and someone has eaten my hay and oat said baby unicorn and it all gone then they went in the room and said someone has sat on my seat said papa unicorn someone has sat on my seat said mother unicorn and someone has sat on my seat said baby unicorn and it broken then they went in the bedroom someone has slept in my bed said papa unicorn someone has slept in my bed said mother unicorn and someone has slept in my bed said baby unicorn and here she is said baby dog then when the bad unicorn woke up he saw Three mad unicorn and he jump out of the window and ran away as fast as he could and he ran back home and told his mum that he would never go so far ever again said the bad unicorn and the three papa and mother and baby unicorn they live happily very after.The end
today we were talking about Goldilocks and the three bears
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