Thursday, 18 August 2016

Derek Redmond

In 1992 in the Olympics in Barcelona.A man named Derek Redmond  and he was a fast runner.from Britain he is British.The race is about to do a 400 meter race.He feels worried to play the game.

When the race started Derek Redmond was running so fast his hamstring broke into half.The He stop But he  was half way through the race and then he felt so worried and he was in heaps of pain his coach practice him all day.but he got up and started hopping on one foot to another.  

Dad help Derek to the finish line so he can end it so Bad he practice all his life .When his dad was walking  he gently push other people out of the way so he can end it .If someone is hurt you help them.You never give up or don’t quit.


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